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Archibald Maule Ramsay[edit]

I have it in mind to nominate for Featured Article status but I wanted to put it here first as it is a bit of a linear story. Ramsay (1894-1955) was a British Conservative MP who became anti-semitic in the late 1930s and was interned during World War II. Does anyone have any info about the periods for which little is known? Dbiv 21:21, 1 Apr 2005 (UTC)

  • You have only three sources listed, which is a little less than ideal. Also, it would be nice to know which facts in the article came from which source. You could do this, for example, using footnotes.
  • His final work seems to be an anti-semitic raving yet you just metion that it's his "autobiography". Perhaps the whole article needs a little bit more clear on such issues.
  • It would be nice to have detailed references from Hansard on e.g. his parlimentary questions
Mozzerati 19:58, 2005 Apr 3 (UTC)

The passage which makes reference to the 'controllers of parliament' suggests a possible element of bias.