Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Yellowstone National Park

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Yellowstone National Park[edit]

I wrote/shot most of this and would like to know what still needs to be done to make this article shine. If it is already there, then I would be OK with this becoming a featured article as-is. But I mainly want feedback. --mav 11:34, 1 Mar 2004 (UTC)

  • Second. Davodd 07:11, Mar 3, 2004 (UTC)
  • Support, excellent job! Just two minor nitpicks: the "Area" in the infobox conflict with the km2 given in the text (since 1 ha = 0.01 km2, the digits should agree), and are the "acres" international or U.S. survey acres? Finally, could the brightness on the "Firehole River" picture be upped a little bit except for the sky? Lupo 08:25, 3 Mar 2004 (UTC)
    • Those are US acres AFAIK. Table fixed. I don't know how to fix the brightness of the land without washing out the sky. I took that photo on an overcast day so there isn't much that can be done. Thanks for the feedback! :) --mav
      • I've lightened up the land and left the sky as is, and also heightened the colours slightly. It's nothing terribly dramatic; if you don't like it, feel free to revert. :) -- Hadal 08:16, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)
        • Gee thanks! :) Looks nice. --mav
  • Support. Kingturtle 05:00, 6 Mar 2004 (UTC)
  • Support. Hadal 08:16, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)
  • Support. Great write-up and wonderful pictures – the best of both worlds. fabiform | talk 04:23, 11 Mar 2004 (UTC)
  • Support. Kwekubo 00:45, 12 Mar 2004 (UTC)